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Artist: Dilosh (Age: 15)
Flash Animation: Angel Light

"Considering the comments, I've made some changes on my animation and added some motion. For more complex animations, please visit my webpage at: http://fly.to/dilosh Thank you. " ~Dilosh

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Nov 16 ,2000

Name = Ian S.
Comments = 1. Motion going right to left has a trail so the edges of the material should angle roughly towards the top right of screen whereas the return from left to right the edges of the material should angle roughly bottom left. You can double the exposure time of each extreme of the move. The extremes on the wings could double the exposure length too.

Dec 4, 2000

Name = Kurt
Comments = I liked the fluff in the tail better in the first image. you have an excellent grasp of the fascial expressions... These look great

Jan 10, 2001

Name = archie
Comments = Wiggle slowly the lower portion of the dress of the angel. its flipping like a mermaid... but its cool.

Name = Tony Walker
Comments = I think that the suggestions were implimented quite well. I'm not a great judge of art work, but I can see where this is going in terms of the "fuller" looking bluish background which provides more "immersion" into the clouds. Also the additional flash animation of the gown, has given rise to a less "static" looking image.

Feb 8, 2001

Name = jason ford
Comments = I like it. the impovement is wonderfull.
my favorite part is the transparinsy in the wings. keep up the good work

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